Friday, June 20, 2008

Writing a Adoption Kids Book...

I love to write. So I figured I would give a kids book a try, so whatever child we adopt has a book just for them. I just wrote it and was curious as to what you all think? I am trying to make it an "adoption kids book" rather than just a typical kids book.


Here is what I have so far:


It was a warm, yet cloudy day when Little Cluck came to stay.

The yard was small, the house looked bland, and two strangers stood there with waving hands!

So scared and worried, was what Little Cluck felt. He stood there quietly, feeling as small as an elf.

Who were these people? Did they not see? This house was too warm! Too Small! Too – wait, what were these?

Little Cluck looked with big surprised eyes. Games upon games were waiting inside!

Wait, he thought and came to a stop. This place was still scary!

These people, this place, what were they like? Did they not know he wanted to hide?

Little Cluck could not help but cry. Where were those he knew? Why could they not come too?

The days carried on, with smooth whispers and play. Hugs and kisses came every day.

Now, Little Cluck could not believe he had been so afraid! Today he was going outside to play.

Mom and Dad stood by and waved. The yard was huge and the house so bright, how could this have ever given him a fright?

That is it! I might expand on it a little, but I wanted to keep it short too.

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